Constructive Feedback/Critique Look here for Help, Artists Helping Artists some more! |
  Feb 17 2007, 05:08 PM
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Serpentard  Posts: 335 Joined: 1:20am October 14, 2005 Location: the Hogwart's Express short bus.    |
Can't figure out how this arm should bend? Not sure how the shadows on this face should look? Those dastardly hands giving you problems??
Post your works-in-progress here and get some input from your fellow artists and audience! It never hurts to have a second opinion, and everyone can improve  ! Note: This thread is only for constructive comments and helpful critique. "AUGH, THAT LOOKS LIKE CRAP" is not a helpful critique. "Awesome pic! I think the left leg looks a little short though" etc. is helpful critique  .
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Mar 9 2007, 09:28 PM
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Rat Spleen Restocker at the Apothecary  Posts: 487 Joined: 1:19pm November 16, 2006 Location: The magical lands of Canada |
Well, I just uploaded my first ever image into the Galleries. I need someone to tell me how it looks, because I'm doubtful anyone's ever going to comment.
It's a pencil sketch of Rufus Scrimgeour I did--unfortunately, my scanner brought out all the eraser lines that were invisible on paper.  Here it is: How is it? Hm? *Nevermind. I deleted the image because it was so bad. If the mods would kindly delete this post, that would be appreciated.
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Mar 16 2007, 11:17 PM
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Just Through the Brick Wall Posts: 8 Joined: 12:18pm August 15, 2006 |
Aww, c'mon and show us. You'll never get any better if you don't let people see your stuff. If it was really that bad, which I doubt, we can help you improve it - which is the whole point of this thread anyway. x)
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Mar 17 2007, 01:06 AM
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Missus Lupin and Mistress Crouch Posts: 5,269 Joined: 4:57am January 28, 2005  |
salamandersoup (what a cool name by the way
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Apr 1 2007, 01:18 PM
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Monster Book Stacker Posts: 362 Joined: 9:12pm August 25, 2006 Location: Searching Through the Magical Menagerie for a Midnight Blue Phoenix |
   For some reason my png file isnt showing up transparent. But It would be great if leaky added a fan video gallery! I was just screwing around because I was bored, what do you think? -------------------- Please Help Me Improve This Unfinished Video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpLjqGOwvJs [img][/img] Click Image To View "Phoenix Productions" |
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Apr 8 2007, 03:05 PM
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Just Through the Brick Wall Posts: 2 Joined: 10:44am April 6, 2007 |
First of all, happy easter! i am not a spectacular artist. in most of my pics I ask for advice...so, got any?
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Apr 8 2007, 08:41 PM
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Hogsmeade's Butcher  Posts: 6,451 Joined: 1:25pm July 10, 2005 Location: Sharpening my cleaver for photo-chopping  |
QUOTE(whizbee_fizzer59 @ Apr 8 2007, 01:05 PM) [snapback]1172484[/snapback] First of all, happy easter! i am not a spectacular artist. in most of my pics I ask for advice...so, got any? Maybe if you post a link to some of your artwork it would be easier to give more specific comments and advice. Also, what media do you use: digital, hand-drawn or a combination? -------------------- |
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 May 27 2007, 01:01 AM
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Just Through the Brick Wall Posts: 8 Joined: 7:41pm June 29, 2005 Location: oh... here and there... |
QUOTE(Midnight Phoenix @ Apr 2 2007, 05:18 AM) [snapback]1162604[/snapback] For some reason my png file isnt showing up transparent. But It would be great if leaky added a fan video gallery! I was just screwing around because I was bored, what do you think? I don't really know about your pictures, Midnight Phoenix, but I like the video, it's highly entertaining!  I think it would be great if you complete it... maybe slip in some of that scene when Weasley twins mocked Ron, who was dancing with McGonagall in HPGoF Anyway, i wish i could make a video, too... 
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Jun 14 2007, 12:38 PM
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Perusing the Magical Menagerie Posts: 96 Joined: 10:21pm April 8, 2006 Location: running or not running |
I started this drawing of the veil a few months ago, promptly forgot about it, and found it in my sketchbook again yesterday. I want to finish it (by adding the rest of the lovely death room, etc.) but before I start I'll post it here for critique or suggestions or something.. I used black colored pencil which is hard to erase as you can see by my failed attempts at the little dais thing.
 click^ for a bigger version the dais doesn't look right to me... should I make it more 3D or something completely different? This post has been edited by An_Eternal_Night: Jun 14 2007, 04:45 PM --------------------   avvy by me |
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Jun 27 2007, 11:46 PM
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Just Through the Brick Wall Posts: 4 Joined: 10:20pm June 26, 2007 Location: Utah, USA |
Just did a cartoon of a 'flying wizard' and thought I'd post it up here. I had tried to sign up at the fan art gallery but I'm guessing it's still down. Anyhow, hope you like, and feel free to leave any comments....thanks!
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