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Deus Ex Machina in the HP series, Conceivable or Inconceivable, That is the Question
lirene
post Aug 1 2008, 05:47 PM
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A very interesting discussion was born in the Carry on Camping thread brought forth by SarahW:
QUOTE(SarahW @ Aug 19 2008, 04:02 PM) *
The issue with the Deluminator, is that for 6.5 books it was a device to remove light. Then, suddenly, it developed the ability to detect the location of lost friends and also teleport the owner to them. I try to avoid the phrase, but lots of critics think of it as the worst type of Deus Ex-Machina.

Starlesswinter posted the following:
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Oh, and the deluminator thing...it IS a deux machina, in my opinion, because its other abilities were not even hinted at before. When Jo foreshadows in that awesome subtle way she has, you can tell it was planned. But things in Deathly Hallows such as the Deluminator, each of the Hallows, the flesh memory Snitch (which I can't seem to find in Quidditch Through the Ages, hm...): these weren't hinted at whatsoever, and I don't buy that they were planned.

And davidenglish the following:
QUOTE(davidenglish @ Aug 20 2008, 11:34 AM) *
I don't see any of the gifts given in Dumbledore's Will as Deus ex machina. Indeed, the gifts parallel the Deathly Hallows. The Trio are on a winding road and have escaped certain death and so Death (Dumbledore) gives them three gifts: The Tales of Beedle the Bard, The Deluminator, and the special Snitch.

According to wikipedia deus ex machina is defined as follows:
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It is an improbable contrivance in a story characterized by a sudden unexpected solution to a seemingly intractable problem. The term "deus ex machina" came to mean any inferior plot device that expeditiously solves the conflict of a narrative.
Several posters have discussed in insightful detail that many of the plot lines unearthed in DH were a bit unbelievable and were contrived by Rowling at the last minute. In addition, some feel that the things that we learn are improbable and we as readers were never given any hints in previous books in the series.

Others feel that Rowling did a brilliant job in interweaving her complex plot, and we learned everything we needed to know, as it was planned and Rowling succeeded in making her plot believable and enough plausible hints were given to the readers.

So, let's discuss deus ex machina as a plot device in the series, its pros and cons and remember to give canon evidence to support your theories smile.gif

I would like to thank SarahW, starlesswinter, davidenglish, roonwit and all of those posters who have contributed to the discussions so far and who have inspired this thread thumbup.gif


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SarahW - I do agree with you on most parts, but I think that some of your examples might be a bit too obvious. Readers might easily catch on to the foreshadowing. But thanks for your support on this issue!

Harry's Horntail - I don't see how you can say that too much setup is a bad thing? If it's very subtle (like all Jo's best clues), why on earth would it be bad? I'm willing to bet a heck of a lot that IF Jo foreshadowed to the level that some fans wanted her to, the majority of readers would be very impressed with her plotting skills. Just the fact that there is so much in the first half of the series and relatively little in the final half is proof enough that she only vaguely knew where she was headed. Why would she NOT foreshadow such "important" plot points? Like I said many times above, no "big deal" would have to be made about these things - simply a sentence or a few words would suffice while remaining effective. The fact that almost nothing was hinted at is what makes this unbelievable to me. It makes no sense to me.

I found it unbelievable that Harry didn't know about flesh memories. He plays Quidditch and read Quidditch Through the Ages (which he says was an interesting read.) And again, it's not as if someone had to immediately tell Harry about flesh memories after he caught the first snitch. (See my Invisibility Cloak example in an earlier post). Doing so would be an obvious "Oh, look at ME! I'm a CLUE!" There is no reason that this simple little information could not have been thrown into any given conversation (more or less) throughout any earlier book.

It's not that a book of wizarding fairy tales is improbable; in fact, it's nearly the opposite. They are perfectly probable, which is why I'm so baffled why they (even the title alone) could not have been mentioned by any character prior to Deathly Hallows.

davidenglish - The things you mention are perfectly fine in Deathly Hallows. They are foreshadowed in that book alone, and that's ok. But what SarahW and I are speaking of is on the level of the entire series. We simply wanted to know that Jo planned the overall arc to the level of detail that she has for each individual book. As for the mirror, it's more that its first use and later use are completely unrelated. I mean, this is of relatively little importance to me; I dont' really care for the mirror. But Aberforth's use in DH is a bit of a deus ex machina, as he just happens to be the only one in the village who hears the Death Eaters, the one shopowner right next to where the trio is, and also Dumbledore's brother. This I find interesting as well, for there were plenty of early hints that the Hog's Head barman was Aberforth, yet he truly did not amount to much in this book. He saved Harry in Hogsmeade and sent Dobby, but nothing of real significance to the plot.

This is a top example for me that Jo did not have a detailed plan for her future story. Aberforth is not crucial, but he was foreshadowed many times. The Elder Wand, for example, is crucial, but it was never foreshadowed. So let's say that Jo knew all along that Aberforth would show up (so she hinted) but not that the wand would (and so she had no reason to hint).

momwitch - I don't agree with your reasoning behind the name change; that's pure speculation. To say so would imply that Jo is still writing mainly for the select group of readers who were young when the books began. It is true that the book mature, but the changing of proper terms in the world is a bit lazy and doesn't defend the "I planned it all out" argument at all. I suppose it's possible that she did this, but I don't really think it's a great move.

Another example of this is the Trace; this magic is frequently talked about in just about every prior book and never once given a name. Then, all of a sudden, it has one. And it's fine that Jo can "change her mind" - it's her world - but it just doesn't give the impression that everything was thought out well before anything was written. By the seventh book, the world is no longer consistent.


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QUOTE(starlesswinter @ Aug 24 2008, 05:16 PM) *
momwitch - I don't agree with your reasoning behind the name change; that's pure speculation. To say so would imply that Jo is still writing mainly for the select group of readers who were young when the books began. It is true that the book mature, but the changing of proper terms in the world is a bit lazy and doesn't defend the "I planned it all out" argument at all. I suppose it's possible that she did this, but I don't really think it's a great move.

Another example of this is the Trace; this magic is frequently talked about in just about every prior book and never once given a name. Then, all of a sudden, it has one. And it's fine that Jo can "change her mind" - it's her world - but it just doesn't give the impression that everything was thought out well before anything was written. By the seventh book, the world is no longer consistent.

bold mine

You are correct, starlesswinter, a guess is pure speculation! smile.gif But I do think that JKR encourages her readers' guesses and speculations and sought for a means to promote it, evidenced through this exchange between Dumbledore and Harry at King's Cross:

DH, Scholastic, p 710
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Dumbledore smiled at Harry, and Harry stared at him.
"And you knew this? You knew--all along?"
"I guessed. But my guesses have usually been good," said Dumbledore happily, and they sat in silence for what seemed like a long time, while the creature behind them continued to whimper and tremble.
"There's more," said Harry. "There's more to it. Why did my wand break the wand he borrowed?"
"As to that, I cannot be sure."
"Have a guess, then," said Harry, and Dumbledore laughed.
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The King's Cross chapter has been likened in other threads as Harry's confrontation with the Wisdom aspect of himself, with Dumbledore personifying that essence as a tangible source. This moment is the culmination of 7 years of learning within the Wizarding World of Hogwarts...which implies a progressive movement towards this critical moment of self-realization. The contemplative monotony of the camping is re-visited through the section which I bolded, emphasizing the growth that Harry has achieved in this time, yet juxtaposed with the restlessness which Voldemort's soul particle still exhibits...Voldemort is not wise and has not reached this point - it is also something which he understands not, and which contributes to his ultimate downfall.

I do believe that JKR was a teacher (of French, wasn't it?), and most good teachers move in babysteps to facilitate their students in reaching a point of true learning, or mastery, like Glinda the Good says to Dorothy in The Wizard of Oz: "You wouldn't have believed me, you had to learn it for yourself." Taking guesses is just one step in that process. A guess can later be a proven as a "bad choice", but you have to commit to something, based upon your own speculation - and not someone else's, this is true courage. Without it, it would be unlikely this point of realization, or wisdom, will ever come...that is the real measurement of what has been truly learned.


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- lirene   Deus Ex Machina in the HP series   Aug 1 2008, 05:47 PM
- - lirene   QUOTE(Shard @ Aug 20 2008, 05:23 PM) I ag...   Aug 20 2008, 05:10 PM
- - starlesswinter   Well of course, Jo SAYS that she planned it all ou...   Aug 21 2008, 01:13 AM
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|- - Ex Libres Cogito   QUOTE(starlesswinter @ Aug 21 2008, 07:13...   Aug 21 2008, 07:30 PM
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